But my best and favorite memory was the game “duck duck goose”. It was a funniest game that I’ve ever played. One person will be the farmer I think, and he will go around past through people call duck, and when he call someone goose and he will start to run. The person that is the goose has to run after him and tries to catch him. I was a Goose and a farmer twice, I ran after the farmer twice and I tried to not let the goose catch me. I fell down 2 times when I was a farmer. I got injured and I can't play anymore games anymore.
I think I'll remember that moment for a very long time. Beacause this is the first year I study in AIS, and Cat Tien was the first long field trip that I went with AIS. I love this field trip, I had a lot of great memories there.
Word Choice: 2; I like the way you described what you did and but it was a little bit confusing at the end when you were talking about duck duck goose.
ReplyDeleteSentence Fluency: 3; I would want to read your paper aloud, Daniel!
Organization: 2; You have a beginning and it kind of grabbed my attention but you don't have an ending.
Proofreading: 2: Spelling is great but there are a few grammar mistakes you need to improve.
Grade: 9/12
I did not very good job.
ReplyDeleteGrade: 8/12
After you continued working on your paragraphs, I would want to fix the grade I gave you, and now it is 12/12. You made such a good improvement! (:
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